Once there is a simple girl that can do things by herself and she can stand on her own feet. When she grew up she had a best friend they always admire each other and they can do things together. Years passed by, the girl had her boyfriend and they are very happy with each other. But one day the simple girl notice that his boyfriend is not always with her when they have their dates. One day she caught his boyfriend with a girl and that girl was her best friend. So they have quarrel.
THE END......
nice story but it is hang (bitin pre)
TumugonBurahinYes, it's nice but it's hanging, like the first comment says.
TumugonBurahinIt doesn't have a good ending and it's short but it is still a very nice story.
TumugonBurahinyea, Kristine and Gio are correct but still it's a nice story.
TumugonBurahinGood....Very Good
TumugonBurahinKeep up the good work ^^
TumugonBurahinyou can improve it and your story was great :D